Tuesday, October 4, 2011

thesis sentence and three topic sentences.

Adahd and dyslexia are both learning disabilitys but are very similar because of who is affected, what is affected, and what accomidations are made for people suffring from these LD's

Adhd is more prevelant in boys in elementry school then girls.

Both adhd and dyslexia are prevelant in someone because there is something diffrent about there brains then most peopel.

special accomidations legally have to be made for students suffering from bith of these diseases.

2 comments:

  1. In your introduction give some really fascinating statistics about how many people are affected by these and ho much money is spent.

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  2. I'm looking for a draft of essay 3 with all of your prewiting and organizing notes
    Dr. K

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